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NaNoWriMo’s Over, Now What? (7 Next Steps)
November 27, 2023 in Blog, Editing, Publishing
Whew! What a month, eh?
But…it’s not over.
While the NaNoWriMo challenge ends on November 30th, your work has only just started.
Here are your next steps after NaNoWriMo:
1. Celebrate
Whether you hit the 50,000 word mark or not, if you wrote during November, you have the beginnings of a book! I read a stat once that said 81% of people say they want to write a book, but most never put BIC (butt in chair) and write. You did! You’re already ahead of the game. Celebrate that!
2. Take Stock of Your Manuscript
During NaNoWriMo, there’s little time for anything but adding words to the page. Now you can take a breath and figure out what’s up with your book. Some things to assess are:
- Did you complete a draft? Even if you hit the 50k mark, you might not have finished the book.
- If you didn’t finish, how much left do you have to write?
- Did your book veer off the path? If so, where and do you want to keep going there or turn back to the plot?
3. Make a Plan to Finish Writing
December 1 is the most dangerous time for your manuscript. You’re taking a breath and thinking about how you don’t have to write now, which could lead to your manuscript languishing, unfinished forever. While you don’t need to keep up the NaNoWriMo pace, you don’t want to stop either.
After a month of writing, you may now have a schedule that works for you, in which case, stick with it and finish your book. But if the pace was too fast and furious to maintain beyond 30-days, create a new schedule and routine for writing. November should have given you some ideas on your peak writing times and sweet spot for single-session word count. For example, perhaps you found it easy to crank out 800 words at lunch. You can create a new schedule to write at least 800 words during lunch.
4. Revise Your Manuscript
Some writers will tell you to take a break from your book. Others dive right into revision. Like most other aspects of writing, you need to figure out what works best for you. I know authors who take a month or more away from their first draft, but they’re usually writing their next book at that time. Me? I give myself a day or so, but then I’m right back into the book. For me, I don’t like dangling projects, but also, staying close to the book means it’s still living inside me and therefore easier to access all the ideas and feelings I was striving for.
Once you know when you’ll revise, you need a process of revision. This too will depend on what works best for you. If you’re a new writer, you’ll need to test out different strategies. Here’s mine:
1. Read through the manuscript: My first pass is a macro view of the book. The goal here is to experience the book as a reader to figure out if it works and if it doesn’t, the areas that are falling short. I look for obvious errors in content such as inconsistent names (Yes, I’ve accidentally changed characters’ names), character development, timeline, plot holes, pacing, and continuity. During this pass I check spelling, grammar, punctuation and wrong word choice (e.g. too instead of to), as well. To get a bird’s-eye view of the MS, you can’t stop to edit for too long, but I find it impossible not to fix the quick issues, or I use the comment feature in Word to leave myself a note about what needs to be done. Since I’ll read through it again (likely several more times), if I get caught up in re-writes at this phase, I don’t worry too much.
2. Check each scene has a purpose: Remember, everything you write should tell us something about the character or move the plot forward. Here’s what I look for:
Each scene should have…
At least one: Plot purpose Character goal Action to advance plot Action to increase tension |
At least two: Character development Cause for character conflict Effect of character conflict Raised stakes Reinforcement of stakes Character motivation |
Bonus: Character backstory World building Tone/mood Theme Foreshadowing |
Note that no scene should have only bonus content.
The next few items I check for used to be separate passes of the book. Thank goodness for tools like ProWritingAid and Autocrit that can help you identify and fix the issues below:
3. Reduce or eliminate weak words: These are words that aren’t needed and can take the oomph out of your writing. They include words such as:
- Weak or Vague Words
- Felt
- Took
- Gave
- Very
- A lot
- Really
- Often
- Always
- Sort of/Kind of
- To Be Verbs
- Thought /Sight/Hear Words
- Thought
- Realized
- Noticed
- Saw
- Heard
- Wondered
- Others
- Beginning/Began
- Starting/Started
- That
- Now
- Just
- And (at the beginning of sentences)
- But (at the beginning of sentences)
- So (at the beginning of sentences)
- Well
- Up/Down
4. Fix passive sentences: For more on passive voice, check out my video on when it’s okay to use and when you shouldn’t (which is most times). This video also will help you find passive voice if you’re not using an editing tool like ProWritingAid (e.g. look for to-be verbs).
5. Reduce or eliminate adverbs: You can instantly beef up or writing, making it more dynamic by using strong verbs. That means reducing to-be verbs and adverbs. If your word processing or editing tool doesn’t identify adverbs, do a search for “ly” in your manuscript, and replace with stronger, more illustrative verbs.
6. Replace dialogue tags: I know an author who wrote a book without a single dialogue tag. Luckily, you don’t have to go that far. But dialogue tags are telling and whenever you can replace it with action, thought, or feeling, you’ll give the reader a more immersive experience. To find these, search for “said,” “asked,” etc or just deal with as you read through the manuscript.
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5. Get Feedback
If you’re not already in a critique group, which can be a big help during your revision, now is the time to get fresh eyes on your book. This is the time to find alpha readers (readers who give feedback on the book for editing and revision purposes). If possible, find a couple of readers who are authors, and some who are readers. This will give you the benefit of an author’s expertise, but also the reader’s experience.
6. Revise Again
Once you have your feedback, it’s time to decide what has merit and what doesn’t. You should consider all feedback and be thankful to the readers who’ve taken the time to provide it. But just because you’ll read it and consider it, doesn’t mean you’ll use it. Sometimes feedback is helpful, such as accidentally messing up the timeline or forgetting to fill a plot hole. Other times, the suggestions will be ideas you won’t use, but they can still give you insight into where your writing failed to do its job.
7. Decide Your Book’s Future
This is where you make the decision to publish, or not. And if you decide to publish, what route will you take? Traditional or self-publishing. Each option has different tasks. Whichever you choose, you should have a professional edit. But if you’re self-publishing, you absolutely need to hire an editor.
Traditional Publishing
- Write a synopsis
- Write query letter
- Formant your MS (double-space, Times New Roman, 12pt, 1 inch margins) – Always follow agent/publisher guidelines for formating and submitting.
- Prep 3 chapters
- Research agents/publishers that represent/publish your category of romance
- Read submission guidelines
- Submit per the guidelines
Self Publishing
- Have a professional edit
- Format your MS (You can use Vellum or Atticus to make this easy for ebook and print)
- Write blurb
- Order cover
- Write front and back matter (author bio etc)
- Make launch and marketing plan
- Upload for presale
- Send ARCs to beta readers and reviewers
☑️If you’d like worksheets and checklists, plus launch and marketing plans, check out The Romance Author’s Novel Organizer.
Do you have other tips for post-NaNoWriMo? Let me know in the comments below!
Breaking into Romance Ghostwriting
November 13, 2023 in Blog, Video, Writing Romance
A question I get asked a lot is how (and why) I became a ghostwriter and how it works. Many people, authors and non-authors alike, wonder why I would write books for someone else instead of writing my own books. I can’t speak to why other people become ghostwriters, but for me, ghostwriting has provided a stable regular income around growing my own author business.
Today I’m going to share with you how to become a romance ghostwriter. I’ll cover the skills that you should have, how to find ghostwriting work, and how to have a successful relationship with your client.
I will not go into how to write a romance as the topic is too big and there is already a great deal of information here at Write with Harte, on the Internet, and in books on how to write a romance.
Text for this video is below:
What is a ghostwriter?
A ghostwriter is a professional, usually freelance, writer who is hired to write works that are officially credited to another person. The ghostwriter’s role is to produce the written content, while the credit for the work is given to someone else, typically the person who hired the ghostwriter. This practice is common among celebrities or other successful people who have a story to tell, but perhaps don’t have the skills to write it. Here are key aspects of ghostwriting:
Anonymity: The ghostwriter’s identity is usually kept confidential. They work behind the scenes, and their contribution is not publicly acknowledged.
Collaboration: In many cases, ghostwriters work closely with the credited author to ensure the written material aligns with their voice, style, and message.
Compensation: Ghostwriters are typically paid for their services either through a flat fee, a per-word rate, or, in some cases, a percentage of royalties from book sales. However, they do not receive public credit or recognition for their work. That means you can’t use it in your resume, marketing materials, or even tell your mother.
Expertise and Adaptability: Successful ghostwriters possess strong writing skills and the ability to adapt their writing style to match the tone and voice of the credited author.
Confidentiality: Ghostwriters often work under confidentiality agreements, ensuring that the details of their writing assignments and their role in creating the work are not disclosed.
In essence, ghostwriting is a professional service where the writer relinquishes claim to the work in exchange for compensation, allowing the client to present the work as their own.
Only a writer can answer for themselves why they would be a ghostwriter as opposed to writing their own books. In many cases a writer may want to write their own books but they don’t have the knowledge or the resources to publish and sell them. Some romance writers ghostwrite until they’re able to make enough from the books they publish under their own name. And there are some writers who simply want to be freelance writers and don’t have an interest in writing their own books but are happy to write them for somebody else.
Why do people hire ghostwriters?
The flip side of the question about why write for someone else instead of myself (which I do), is why would an author hire a writer? The answer is that the person who hires a ghostwriter isn’t a writer, they’re an entrepreneur. If somebody wanted to open a widget shop but didn’t know how to make widgets, they would hire a widget maker or they would find a source of widgets. Entrepreneurs who want to get involved in publishing but don’t want or know how to write have to do the same thing. They have to find a source for books that they can publish.
A Note About AI
Will AI replace ghostwriters? Maybe. AI generated fiction still isn’t as good as human-generated fiction. But someone who is very good at prompting and revising could create a decent romance using AI.
HOWEVER, people who hire ghostwriters do it to save time and money. They’re not going to invest their time into figuring out AI and revision. It is possible that if it were less expensive and faster, that they’d hire someone who understood storytelling and good writing, and who was a good AI prompter and editor, to write using AI.
Note that I don’t think AI will completely replace romance authors in general. As long as you can write a story readers love and can find your reader market, you’ll be fine.
One final note: DO NOT USE AI TO GHOSTWRITE for your client. They’re hiring you…a professional writer to write for them. You can use AI to help with research or even plotting, but you need to write all the words.
Potential income from romance ghostwriting.
Can you earn a living ghostwriting romance? It might be tough depending on how much the job pays. Since the work is usually freelance, the income might not be steady. I’ve been lucky that I have a client who is successful (I’m not her only writer) and releases monthly. But of course to have a steady income means writing steadily. I average a book a month.
The amount you earn as a ghost writer depends on a few factors including:
Experience: Beginner ghostwriters will generally earn less than experienced ones. As they build their portfolio and gain more experience, they can start charging more for their services.
Market Demand: The demand for romance novels can also impact rates. If there’s a high demand for romance content, experienced ghostwriters in this genre may charge premium rates.
Project Specifics: The rates might depend on the specifics of the project, such as the required research, the level of creativity and originality needed, and the turnaround time.
Employer: If you work through a company that offers ghostwriting services, you’ll usually earn less than if you’re hired directly by the client.
The pay rate for the actual book itself can be calculated in a variety of ways including:
Per Word or Per Page Rates: Some ghostwriters are paid based on the number of words or pages they write. Rates can range from $0.01 to $0.10 per word or more for experienced writers. Sometimes the per word rate is provided per 1000 words. A $0.01 word rate would be $10 per 1000 words (which I wouldn’t take). Most typical rates I see offered are $15 to $20 per 1000 words.
Per page rates for romance ghostwriters are around $5 per page, give or take a few bucks.
Flat Fee: For a full-length novel, ghostwriters might charge a flat fee. For a romance ghostwriter, will usually be anywhere from $1000 to $2000 and depends on the length of the book.
Royalties and Credit: I’ve never seen this in romance ghost writing, but if you’re good and highly valued, you might be able to negotiate a share of royalties from book sales. This is especially possible if you work for a publishing house. However, as ghostwriters typically relinquish claim to the work, they often do not receive credit or royalties.
There are a couple of ghostwriting tasks that you can earn payment for. If you are writing the plot you’ll usually receive a flat fee of anywhere between $50 to $150. Some clients may also hire you to write their blurb, which is an additional fee of $50 to $100.
Knowledge and Skills Needed to Be a Successful Ghost Writer
Clients hire professionals, and that means you need to know how to write well, and in particular, how to write a romance. Here are some other things you should know:
Writing to Market: Because we’re talking about clients who are entrepreneurs, the romances you’re going to write are going to be similar to the ones that are selling well, typically on Amazon. Essentially you will be writing to market. In most cases, your client will tell you the romance category and subgenre, as well as tropes. They will have picked these areas because they’re selling well and it will be your job to craft a romance that fits within those guidelines.
Because of this, it is helpful to have knowledge of what is selling in the romance marketplace particularly in the category and sub genre, as well as the tropes that your client is interested and having you write. On Amazon, you can read the first few pages of books that are selling well in the areas your client is hoping to target to learn things like writing style, tone, point of view, tense, etc.
Plotting: If you’re a pantser, you might not like plotting, but the client will want a plot before greenlighting writing. In most cases you will be asked to provide a document that outlines the characters, including their goals and conflicts and other information about them, the location that your story takes place in, a brief synopsis of the story, and a chapter by chapter outline. One thing that I like to do with my client, is once I’m given the information about the story she wants, I create an outline of the major beats, as well as character information. Once she tells me that she likes the basic overview of the story, I go flesh it out into chapters.
Sometimes a client will have a separate plotter. I actually like it when my client gives me plots created by someone else because plotting is so challenging for me.
Adaptability in Voice and Style: As a ghostwriter, you’ll be writing in someone else’s name, which means adapting your voice and style to align with your client’s expectations and their readers’ preferences. This includes:
- Versatility in Writing Styles: Ability to switch between different writing styles, tones, and perspectives (e.g., first-person, third-person).
- Mimicking Clients’ Styles: The skill to study and replicate the unique voice of your client (or other work they’ve had ghostwritten), ensuring consistency in their body of work.
- Tailoring to Sub-genres: Each romance sub-genre has its nuances, from the historical accuracy in historical romances to the suspense elements in romantic thrillers. Understanding these subtleties is crucial.
Write Frequently, Steadily with Short Deadlines: In the romance writing genre, most clients are going to want to publish fairly frequently. This could mean every three to six weeks. In most cases, you will be giving a series project, and expected to write the three or more books for that series, with each having three to four weeks to write it. That means you need to be able to write anywhere between 70,000 and 80,000 words in three to four weeks.
In order to achieve this you should be able to write anywhere between 2000 to 4000 words a day. For example, if you are asked to write a 70,000 word romance, and you’re given 30 days to complete it, that means you have to write 2300 words a day. If you would like to take weekends off, you would need to write 3500 words a day to achieve that 70,000 word romance novel within 30 days.
I’ll admit that when I first started ghostwriting, this is the part that scared me the most. I rarely succeeded at NaNoWriMo at only 1,667 words a day. But before this scares you off, let me share with you some tips on how you can write quickly.
- Write from a plot. The advantage of a chapter by chapter plot is that each time you sit down to write you know exactly what is going to be happening. There’s no getting stuck or having writers block. Writing became so much more enjoyable once I started writing from a plot because I never get stuck.
- Learn to dictate. Dictation is something that I put off learning because the few times I tried it, it was awkward. But at one point I was working with two clients, which required me to type a lot, and I developed a repetitive strain injury in my fingers. Because it was too painful to type, I was forced to learn dictation. Typing, I can generally produce anywhere between 1600 and 1800 words an hour. With dictation, I produce around 4000, sometimes close to 5000, words in an hour. If my word count goal is 3,500 words a day, I can type it in two hours, or dictate it in one.
- Write everyday. I’m not saying that you can’t take a day or two off. But by writing every day at least five days a week, makes sitting down to write each day easier. For one, it becomes a habit. But more than that, writing every day the story stays with you. Even when you’re not writing the story is percolating in your brain as you go through your day. During those times you’re fleshing out your ideas or thinking about what you’re going to write next. When you sit down again to write, you can easily jump back in and immerse yourself into the story.
Tips for working with clients
Once you get the job, you need to deliver what your client wants. Here are some things to keep in mind:
Understand Client Expectations: Begin with a clear understanding of what your client is looking for in their romance novel. Discuss the plot, characters, tone, and any specific requirements or preferences they have.
Effective Communication: Maintain open and regular communication. Sometimes the client will ask you to report in at various intervals. But even if they don’t, be proactive in providing updates and receptive to feedback. Clear communication helps avoid misunderstandings and ensures that both parties are on the same page.
Flexibility and Adaptability: Be prepared to adapt your writing to meet the client’s vision. Flexibility in incorporating client suggestions and making revisions is key.
Respect Deadlines: Always adhere to agreed-upon deadlines. You may be asked to meet pacing deadlines for review. Other times, you may just have a project deadline. Whatever the case, meet your deadlines. Your client often has the publishing date for the project. After yo, the book goes to the editor. The client likely has a process by which all the tasks to publishing are done, and if you’re late, you could mess that up, and lose out on future work. You’re a professional writer so you need to act like it. Timeliness is crucial in maintaining a professional relationship and building a reputation for reliability.
Confidentiality: As a ghostwriter, you must respect the confidential nature of your work. Ensure that you adhere to any non-disclosure agreements or confidentiality clauses in your contracts. That means not telling your family the name on the book. It also means you can’t use your work in your portfolio. If you want a testimonial or reference, ask your client if that’s possible.
Quality of Work: Consistently deliver high-quality writing. This includes well-developed characters, engaging plotlines, and maintaining the integrity of the romance genre.
Handle Feedback Constructively: Be open to constructive criticism and willing to make changes based on the client’s feedback. Remember, it’s about bringing their vision to life.
Clear Agreements and Contracts: Have a clear contract in place that outlines the scope of work, payment terms, deadlines, revision policies, and rights. This helps in avoiding future disputes. Usually your client will supply this, but if not, create one and ask your client to sign it.
Understanding the Audience: Familiarize yourself with the target audience for the book. Different audiences have different expectations from romance novels, and this understanding can guide your writing.
Stay Updated with Genre Trends: As mentioned in the writing to market section, keep up with current trends and themes in the romance genre. This knowledge can be invaluable in meeting the client’s expectations and making the book relevant to current readers.
Invoice Promptly and Professionally: Depending on your work set up, you may be paid at the end of the project automatically or after a review. If your client asks for an invoice, send it per the outline of the contract. Maintain professionalism in all financial dealings.
Build a Relationship: Aim to build a long-term professional relationship with each client. If your client is successful, you’ll have steady regular work. I’ve written over 60 books for my client in the last few years.
Seek Feedback for Improvement: After completing a project, ask the client for feedback on your work and their experience working with you. This can provide valuable insights for future projects. I’ve often asked my client about areas of the book I was concerned about or the feedback from her readers because I want to make sure she and her readers are happy.
Stay Organized: Keep track of all client communications, notes, drafts, and deadlines. Good organization helps in managing multiple projects efficiently.
Be Proactive in Problem-Solving: If issues arise, address them proactively. Offer solutions and be willing to work collaboratively to resolve any problems. If you need time off or will miss your deadline, let your client know asap. I always give my client my travel or family-time schedule so we can build it into the deadline.
Where to find romance ghost writing jobs?
Before you go looking for romance ghostwriting jobs, Here are a few things you should put together first:
1. Determine the type of romance writing you can do. If you can write across multiple categories, that gives you more opportunities to find work. But you also need to be aware of categories that you don’t have experience in or that perhaps you don’t want to write. For example maybe your experience and your interest is in traditional contemporary romance, and not paranormal or romantic fantasy. So any client that’s looking for somebody to write paranormal romance is probably not somebody that you would apply to.
2. Create a resume that has any information about your writing experience especially if you have already written romances before. Even if you’ve not written romance, if you’ve freelanced before, mention this. Clients want good writers, but also, they want one that understands working with clients and deadlines.
3. Put together a writing sample. If you have already written a romance, you can take a chapter out of what you’ve already written and use it as part of your job application. In some cases, the client or the organization that is hiring ghost writers may give you a prompt and ask you to write something towards that.
Platforms and Forums for Ghostwriting Jobs
There are place where you can find romance ghostwriting jobs.
Ghost Writing Companies
HotGhostWriter: Hires fiction and non-fiction writers, editors, and narrators (audiobook). Writers are paid for plotting, writing, and blurbs. Pay depends on what program your in and your experience. Generally it’s between $15 to $30 per 100 words.
Urban Writers: Like HotGhostWriter, Urban Writers hires writers and editors, and other publishing professionals. I can’t find their pay rates, but I would imagine they’re similar to HotGhostWriter.
Freelance Platforms
To attract clients, your online profile should be compelling including showing your expertise and experience, writing samples, testimonials if you have them, and use of relevant keywords so clients can find your profile.Some of the most popular freelance platforms and job sources include:
- Upwork: This freelancing platform allows you to create a profile, showcase your portfolio, and bid on romance ghostwriting projects.
- Fiverr: Known for gigs in various niches, Fiverr is a good place to offer your romance ghostwriting services at set prices.
- Freelancer.com: Similar to Upwork, here you can find various ghostwriting projects, including those in the romance genre.
- Reedsy: Catering specifically to the book industry, Reedsy connects ghostwriters with authors and publishers looking for writing services.
Job Boards
- Problogger Job Board: This is where I found my first ghostwriting job.
- Google search of job boards
Networking with Authors, Publishers, and Literary Agents
Building a network is crucial in the ghostwriting industry. Here are some ways to do it:
- Writing Conferences and Workshops: Attend these events to meet authors, editors, and literary agents who might need ghostwriting services.
- Social Media and Online Communities: Engage with writing communities on platforms like LinkedIn, Facebook, Twitter, and
- Goodreads. Participating in discussions and showcasing your expertise can lead to job opportunities.
- Joining Writers’ Associations: Becoming a member of writers’ groups like the Romance Writers of America (RWA) can provide networking opportunities and access to job listings.
37 Ideas to Bust Writer’s Block During NaNoWriMo or Anytime
October 30, 2023 in Blog, Writing Romance
Success at National Novel Writing Month starts with a good plan and an environment conducing to writing. But it finishes with the ability to keep writing when the muse leaves, you’re overwhelmed and frustrated, or you’re just don’t want to write.
To help you get through these moments, here are 37 ideas, in no particular order, of things to do when you get stuck or want to quit NaNoWriMo.
Text version is below video.
37 Ideas to Bust Writer’s Block During NaNoWriMo
1. Take a Break
Taking a break may seem counterintuitive during a writing challenge, but it’s often exactly what’s needed. Step away from your novel to clear your head. Take a walk, have a cup of tea, or just breathe. Sometimes, your story will come as you do another activity, so have a notebook or recorder on hand.
2. Change Your Environment
Having a writing space is important, but if you find yourself uninspired, writing somewhere else can help. Move to a different spot in your home or go to the library or a local coffee café.
3. Write Out of Order
There is no rule that says you have to write from the beginning to the end. If you’re stuck on a particular part of your novel, jump ahead to a scene that you know or are excited about. I can’t tell you how many times I’ve gone from writing the inciting event to the black moment during NaNoWriMo. Skipping to scenes you know the content of helps you keep up on word count, and can spark ideas for the scenes you’re struggling with.
4. Flesh Out Writing
Sometimes what you need is already on the page. Go back and add layers of description and senses to your scenes. Enhance the emotional stakes and the atmosphere. As a romance writer, these details can deepen the intimacy between your characters.
5. Recap with Story Summaries
Take a moment to recap what’s happened in your story so far. Yes, this might be redundant and possibly will be cut in revision, but summarizing what’s already happened can help you conceptualize and organize your story ideas and remind you of forgotten plot points and character arcs that need resolving, providing a springboard for new material.
6. “What If” Questions
When in doubt, ask “What if?” Pose scenarios to your characters that challenge them, alter their paths, or deepen their relationships. Romance thrives on tension and the unexpected, which makes it fertile ground for “what if” questions.
7. Use Writing Prompts
Writing prompts can awaken your muse by giving you ideas you might have considered. Squibler has 130 romance writing prompts. Reedsy has 80. Screencraft has 101 romance prompts. If your romance includes another genre like suspense or fantasy, do a search on the genre and story prompts (e.g. fantasy story prompts).
8. Brainstorm with AI
AI has become a dirty word in writing, but AI is a tool like anything else. Beyond doing the writing, AI can research, edit, and even brainstorm ideas. Simply give the AI a basic summary of what’s going on and ask it for ideas on what can happen next.
9. Read What You’ve Already Written
This is not to revise or edit, although you could do that if it helps. Reading your story can help you re-immerse yourself into the plot and reconnect with your characters.
10. Join a Write-In
Write-ins are a staple of NaNoWriMo for a reason. They remind us that, even though writing is often a solitary activity, we’re all in this together. Plus, nothing beats the motivational power of writing alongside others. Check NaNoWriMo for write-ins in your area, or if there aren’t any, find online write-ins.
11. Talk About Your Story
Talking about your story can help you work through blocks by clarifying your thoughts. Sometimes this can happen simply by talking about it, but your partner might come up with ideas as well. I’ve used this a lot in my writing, and interestingly, the ideas my writing buddies come up with often don’t work, but they trigger ideas that do.
12. Free Write
If the pressure is mounting, let go of your novel for a bit and free write. Pen a poem, a diary entry, or a character’s secret thought. Freeform writing can loosen up mental blocks and open new pathways.
13. Letting Go of the Count
If write and check word count (359) over (578) and over (667)) again, it’s time to stop. Obsessing over word count can be counterproductive because it creates stress (ugh…still 1000 words to go!). Stop thinking about word count and simply write the story. If you fall short, so what? All words are good words. They all get you closer to getting your story written.
14. Create a Playlist
Music is a powerful mood setter. Create a playlist that reflects the mood of your novel, or a character’s personality. I love to write my romances to sensual old R&B music. Other times, I prefer instrumental music so the lyrics don’t distract me.
15. Move
Never underestimate the power of a walk or a workout to kickstart your creativity. Physical activity gets blood to your brain and clarity to your thoughts. I’ve done some of my best writing while exercising.
16. Delve into Characters
Do character development exercises. I’m not a huge fan of character sheets, but if you’re stuck, it could be that you don’t have a good sense of your characters yet, and these sheets or development exercises can help. While knowing their favorite food might help, look more into their past pains, current fears, and motivations.
17. Research
Similar to character development, research can provide more fuel to your story. Whether it’s historical details or understanding a profession, knowledge can breed inspiration.
18. Change Your Writing Mode
Switching from keyboard to pen can shift your mental gears. The difference of handwriting can tap into a different part of your brain, where the romantic and the dramatic live. Or dictate, which too requires a shift in writing. You can use AI tools to transcribe your handwriting. If you record your voice (as opposed to dictating into your documents) you can use AI to transcribe your words.
19. Keep Your Eye on the Prize
Okay, so there is no prize except bragging rights to complete NaNoWriMo, except that by the end of the month you have 50,000 words of a book. Visualizing your completed novel can be incredibly motivating. Picture the final scene, the last kiss, the words “The End” on the page. Or take it further and imagine your book in print!
20. Delve into Backstory
Like recapping, writing backstory can be something that ends up being cut from your final draft. However, writing backstory scenes can flesh out your characters and their motivations, which in turn can make writing the current story easier.
21. Focus on Subplots and Side Quests
Stuck with your main story? Dive into a subplot. Romance novels often have rich secondary plots that can be developed and woven into the main narrative.
22. Write from Another Character’s POV
There are several ways you can use this tip. First, rewrite a past scene from the other character’s POV. Yes, you’ll likely cut it, but you’re writing and learning more about your character. Another option is to write from a character’s POV that won’t be in the final draft. For example, maybe you want to write from the meddling mother’s POV or the sidekick’s. Doing this might give you insight into dynamics and tensions you hadn’t considered before.
23. Do a Sprint
Set yourself a timed writing challenge. It’s amazing what can come out when you’re writing against the clock and don’t have time to overthink. You can do this on your own or join a sprint online.
24. Add a Plot Twist
If you’re stuck, do something completely different. Go left instead of right. Make something go wrong or maybe go right. Introduce an unexpected element that will take your characters by surprise.
25. Give Yourself a Reward
Reward yourself for milestones. A little celebration can go a long way toward keeping you motivated. Do a happy dance. Allow yourself extra time on social media. Have a treat.
26. Do a Mind Map
Mind mapping can help you visualize where your story could go. There are several ways you can do this. One would be to put the issue you’re stuck on in the middle, and then use the spokes to come up with new ideas, letting those thoughts lead to new ones.
27. Ask for Feedback
Connect with another writer through Write with Harte or one of the Write with Harte groups or find a critique group in your area. Sometimes new eyes on your work can see things you’ve missed and provide the feedback or help you brainstorm ideas that will help you move forward.
28. Online Groups
Online forums provide a wealth of support and advice. They’re a place to share struggles and solutions and to remember that you’re not alone. We’ve got groups over at Write with Harte, or find writing groups on Facebook.
29. Read
Stephen King has said, “If you don’t have time to read, you don’t have the time (or the tools) to write. Simple as that.” Read a book from an author you admire. Your writing heroes can remind you of why you wanted to write in the first place, and their words can inspire you to keep writing.
30. Create a Vision Board for Your Book
Create a visual collage of your novel’s themes, settings, and characters, or you can go further and create a cover and a best seller sticker. This can serve as a tangible touchstone for your imagination. You can do this on Pinterest for a digital board. Or create one on Canva and print it out to hang where you can see it while you write.
31. Write Letters to Your Characters
Writing a letter to your characters is a unique way to delve into their psyches and can lead to revelations about their actions and desires. Better yet, write a letter to yourself from your characters.
32. Revisit the Core Conflict
In romance, conflict is what drives the story. If our characters met and fell in love, there wouldn’t be any interest. It’s their inner and outer conflicts that threaten the HEA that makes the story compelling. If you’re stuck, revisit the conflicts and ways you can use them to impede love.
33. Write the HEA
If you’re really stuck, write the end of the book, and then work backwards.
34. Refer to Your Outline
Sometimes a big picture overview can help you see the forest through the trees in writing. Other times, reviewing the outline can help you figure out what’s next or what’s not working. Have you veered off the outline, and if so, do you need to find your way back OR do you need to revamp the outline to fit the revised story?
35. Meditate or Daydream
Meditation can clear a cluttered mind, making space for new ideas to form. Or consider doing a mindless activity like walking or resting, and simply let your mind run free on your idea.
36. Draw Your Scene
Sketch out the scene or part of the story that is giving you trouble. You don’t have to be an artist to conceptualize your story. Drawing a scene can help you see it more clearly, adding layers of detail that you can then describe in your writing. Or like with vision boarding, search for images that fit elements of your book which can help you describe them.
37. Shut up the Critic and Write
Often what stops the writing process is worrying about the quality of the writing whether it’s the words themselves or the story. You have to stop that. Your inner critic will stifle your creativity. Worrying about writing things you’ll later cut (as some of the ideas above will result in) only adds to that. Your first draft is supposed to a free flow of ideas. It’s okay if it’s out of control, sometimes doesn’t make sense, or goes off the deep end. That’s what revision and editing are meant to clean up. So if you’re stuck. shut up the critic, woo the muse, and let your creativity flow.
Do you have other ideas to help work through writer’s block or other struggles in writing? Let me know in the comments!
Surviving NaNoWriMo (Free Checklist and Planner)
October 23, 2023 in Blog, Video, Writing Romance
When it comes to preparing for NaNoWriMo or WWH’s Writevember, much of October (or Preptober) is spent developing a book idea, fleshing it out with characters, settings, and a plot. But success at NaNoWriMo doesn’t just come from being prepared to write. Like any other goal, having time, space, and an environment that supports the goal is key.
Here are tips on how to prepare your life for a successful NaNoWriMo in November.
(Read text version of this video below)
Preparing to Write
It doesn’t matter if you know what to write if you don’t have the space or time to get it done. To succeed at NaNoWriMo, you need to:
1) Make time to write. NaNoWriMo pace is 1,667 words a day, which can be done in an hour or so if you know what to write when you sit at your desk. Where can you find an hour or an hour and a half to write? Early in the morning? During lunch? Late at night? Whatever time you come up with, put it in your schedule.
2) Make space to write. Have a designated area, preferably set up for writing and away from distractions, where you can write. Not only should it have your computer or writing materials, but also anything else you need, such as notepads, notes, phrasing books, research, inspiring quotes, etc.
3) Let your friends and family know your goal of writing a novel. Enlist their support in your endeavor! The checklist below has an infographic from NaNoWriMo on “Caring For Your NaNoWriMo Writer.” Share it with your family and friends so they can help you achieve your goal.
4) Divvy up chores and other to-dos in your family for the month of November. Just for one month, your family can help you with your chores. If you normally do the dishes or laundry or mow the lawn, pay the bills or take out the trash, ask members of your family take care of it in November. This is a good month to find someone else to host Thanksgiving if that’s normally your job as well.
5) Extend deadlines if possible. If you have work, school, or other projects due in November, see if you can extend their due dates.
6) Anticipate distractions and nip them in the bud. Distractions can be a huge problem in NaNoWrimo. Make of list of possible things that could stop you from writing and make a plan to avoid them or respond to them in a way that doesn’t keep you from writing. That could mean turning off your phone and notifications while writing. Or maybe asking your partner or a neighbor to watch the kids while you’re writing. Here is a fun video from NaNoWriMo on Those Pesky NaNo Distractions.
7) Knowing that Thanksgiving is coming, plan to write ahead a little before the holiday. The pace of NaNoWriMo is 1,667 words a day, but that includes Thanksgiving. If you take three days off, your pace goes up to 1,852 words per day. Or, if you’re traveling, make a plan for writing while away. One year, I hand wrote my story while at my mom’s house for Thanksgiving. It was the first year I won NaNoWriMo. That year I had to retype everything, but now with AI, you can scan your handwritten page using your phone and Google Drive. Then on your computer, find the PDF in Google Drive, and open with Google Docs. The handwriting will be transcribed into type. The font will be wonky, but Select-All and change the font and then edit.
8) Plan meals ahead of time. If possible, assign cooking to someone else in the family. But if that’s not possible, use your Crockpot or Instapot to make cooking less time-consuming.
FREE WritevemberNaNoWriMo Prep Checklist
Surviving NaNoWriMo in November
You’ve prepared your novel and your life to write 50,000 words in November. Now you need to get it done. Here’s how:
Get Ready, Get Set…
If you’ve done the above checklist and prepped your novel idea, then you should be ready.
The secret to making NaNoWriMo easier (besides the checklist above) is knowing what you’re going to write when you sit down at your computer. The more you plot, the easier and faster you can write. It is excruciatingly hard to sit in your chair to type if you’re drawing a blank about what to write.
Below are Day Before Writing To-Dos. You should do these tasks on October 31 and every day, after you’ve finished writing, so that you’re prepared to write the next day. Each day, you should be able to sit down, review your notes and the write 1,667 word without stopping.
Note to pantsters: You need to do this too if you want to avoid wasting time staring at the screen wondering what to write.
Day Before Writing To-Dos
1) Review your plot notes for the chapter or scene you plan to write tomorrow. Make sure you have enough to write to meet your 1,667 word goal. For day one, that means reviewing your opening unless you plan to write out of order.
2) Make any additional notes that come to you, such as dialogue or new ideas. Often when you’re writing, new ideas come to you. If those ideas are about tomorrow’s writing (or any future writing), jot them down in your document, comments, plot outline, or wherever you can see it when it’s time to write tomorrow.
3) Check that any research needed to write the next scene is done, and the data is in your notes or otherwise easily accessible. Try not to waste your time researching while writing. Anything you need to know to write, have the information with your notes or plot prior to writing.
Writing Day
If you’ve prepped your writing yesterday, then all you need to do is:
1) Go to your writing space at your designated writing time. Be sure to let your family and friends know that this is a “Do Not Disturb” time.
2) Turn off your phone and computer notifications. Keep your browser closed or better yet, turn off the Internet on your computer. Remember to let your family know you’re writing and can’t be interrupted. My rule was don’t interrupt me unless there’s blood or fire.
3) Review the chapter/scene notes from yesterday, including any research data you need to include.
4) Read the last chapter/scene from yesterday if you need help getting back into your story.
5) Write! Your goal is to reach 1,667 words each day for NaNoWriMo or whatever your Writevember daily goal is. If you fall short, don’t freak out. You can make it up another day.
6) Do Day Before Writing To Dos. Don’t end your writing session until you’ve planned for tomorrow’s writing.
To your writing and life schedule easier during November, download the free daily planner sheet that includes Today’s Writing, Today’s Word Count, Total Word Count, and Tomorrow’s Writing. The left side of the page you can use for whatever else you need to plan for the day.
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Unlocking Book Reviews: Pro Tips for Romance Writers
October 17, 2023 in Blog, Video
Your book is written and ready to publish. What do you do next? Most authors spend their pre-launch time seeking reviews. Why? Because research shows that reviews play a role in sales. A 2018 survey by Gigi Griffis at The Ramble, revealed that 52% of readers read reviews whereas only 13% read the blurb. The survey also indicated that readers were more likely to buy a book from an author they knew or that was recommended by a friend. Only 7% of the participants indicated that a prominent ad placement or free/sale opportunity would encourage them to buy.
Northwestern’s Spiegel Research determined that “The purchase likelihood for a product with five reviews is 270% greater than the purchase likelihood of a product with no reviews.” Interestingly, this study also saw peak review influence over buying when reviews were 4.0 to 4.7. Above that, and consumers appeared to be suspicious of the review. This means authors shouldn’t be upset, as some I’ve come across have been, when they get a 4-star review. That 4-star may better lead to a sale than a 5-star review.
What this all tells us is that expanding your reader base by asking for reviews as well as encouraging them to recommend your books, can help you sell more books.
Text version is below video
Here are 18 ways to get reviews for your upcoming release (or even your backlist):
1. Ask for reviews at the end of your books
Put a request for a review right after “The End” in each of your books. Make it easy by including a link to the book retailer’s review. This will require you to have a different version of the book for each retailer you post to, but the easier it is for a reader to click and review, the more likely you’ll get a review. An easier way would be to have a single link to a page that has a links to each book retailer, but this is an extra step, which could impede readers from leaving a review.
2. Build up a list of book bloggers in your subgenre of romance.
Three months or more out from the release of your book, start building a list of romance book bloggers. Many bloggers want 6-12 weeks to read your book prior to release.
You can do a search on “romance book bloggers.” Another option is to research for reviews on published books similar to yours to see where they’re posted. For example, title+review or title+book review. You can also find book bloggers and reviewers by checking the Editorial Reviews section on Amazon pages with books similar to yours. In this section, authors/publishers can list reviews from other sources, such as blogs.
When you find blogs that would be a good fit for your romance, check to see if there is a book review policy or guidelines, and then follow them. If there are no guidelines, use the contact page or information to reach out to the blogger. Let the blogger know why you think your book would be a fit for their blog, and include your blurb and bio, as well as how you can deliver the book to them (e.g. send as attachment, Bookfunnel, etc). Let them know you’re willing to share the review on your social media, which can help them gain more exposure as well.
When you email, personalize it to the blogger so they don’t feel they’re part of a mass emailing. It’s easier to reject emails that appear to be bulk mailed.
3. BookTube, BookTok, Bookstagram
Similar to bloggers, YouTube, TikTok, and Instagram have romance readers who read, review, and recommend books. Searching these platforms for hashtags around romance books can help you find them. A few to consider are #bookblogger(s),#bookreview(s), #bookreviewer, #readingromance, #romancebookblogger, #currentlyreading, #bookrecommendatioin. You can include platform specific hashtags such as #bookstagram, #booktok, #booktube.
You can also search by keywords such as “Book Blogger” or “Book Reviews.”
Another option is to us a paid resource that has a database of influencers such as Promoty. Influencer Marketing Hub has a list of other resources.
Depending on the size of the influencer’s following, you may be asked to pay money. While it’s a no-no to pay for reviews that show up on Amazon, in this situation, it’s generally okay to pay for services that can help get your book out to reviewers or for influencer marketing.
If an influencer does review your book, be sure to follow, share and give a big thank you.
4. Book Podcasts
Reach out to podcast hosts who feature authors or book reviews and inquire if they would be interested in reviewing your book or having you as a guest on their podcast. You can find podcasters the same way you find bloggers. In fact, many of the bloggers have podcasts. You’ll want to pitch them the same way you pitch bloggers by following their pitch guidelines or contacting them with your book information. Be sure to listen to a few episodes so you can be sure your book is a fit.
5. Send out Advanced Reader Copies (ARCs)
Advanced Reader Copies are what you’ll send to book bloggers and influencers prior to your book release. But they’re not the only review resources. Here are other people and places you can send ARCs to:
- Your Alpha and Beta Readers: These readers have helped you improve your book, which means they’re not only a great support, but they’re also invested in your success.
- Your ARC Team: You can build this through your email list and social media. Kindlepreneur has a good article on building an ARC team.
- Booksprout or Booksirens which are resources that help you reach readers and built your ARC team. Through these services you can set a limit on how many ARCs will be available and conditions for getting the book, such as leaving a review at Amazon is required. You can ask for reviews at other sites such as Goodreads or Bookbub as well. The services can send reminders to reviewers, and it can block anyone who got a book but didn’t leave a review from getting an ARC from you in the future. Just be sure to give your reviewers enough time to read the book. I like to get the book to my ARC team at least 3 weeks in advance of release. These services aren’t free, but they’re affordable.
- Reedsy Discovery will give you access to their readers as well as a promotional page, and potential listing on the Reedsy feed and in newsletter for readers. At $50, it’s not too expensive to try.
- NetGalley is another service where you can post your book and readers can request it in exchange for a review. This is a good resource to access bloggers, librarians and others in the book industry.
- Kirkus Reviews or Foreword Clarion are two other review services, although they’re a bit expensive.
6. Build your email list.
I see many authors lamenting about email lists. They don’t want the expense and can’t figure out what to email. Then there’s the building of it, which can be a significant task on its own. This is a mistake. Authors should actively build a list of readers they can connect with. Think about it. These are readers who love you so much they give you their email! They WANT to hear from you! You can check out my post on email which not only goes into detail on how it’s more effective than social media, but also how to create it, build it, and what to send your subscribers.
Once you have your list, email your subscribers about your new book, and remind them to leave a review. In fact, you can invite them to join your ARC team.
7. Review Page on Your Author Website
This can be a great page to share reviews (note that many sites hold copyright to reviews left so don’t just copy and paste. Ask reviewers for permission). This page can also be a place where you can ask readers to leave reviews on book sites or Goodreads. Remember, to give them links directly to the book on the retailers and Goodreads so they can easily follow through.
Readers can leave reviews on your website. If you’re website is built on WordPress, here is a list of review plugins. If you do direct sales and use Shopify, you can add a review app as well.
8. Connect with active reviewers on Amazon
This can be a time consuming effort, but it can be effective for generating reviews on Amazon. Search for books similar to yours and scroll down to the reviews. Click on a reviewer to learn more about them, such as other books they’ve reviewed and their reviewer rank. Sometimes they’ll include website or contact information. Pitch them as you would bloggers or other reviewers. There are tools and services that can help you find Amazon reviewers, such as the Review Grabber tool at Author Marketing Club.
9. Goodreads
Create an author profile on Goodreads, add your book to the library, and connect with readers and other authors. You can also join Goodreads groups related to romance novels and participate in discussions. Alessandra Torre has a free webinar on how to use Goodreads to sell more books.
10. Social Media
Leverage your social media platforms like X, Facebook, and Instagram to connect with readers and other authors. Regularly post updates about your book and encourage your followers to leave reviews. Use relevant hashtags to increase the visibility of your posts and don’t forget to engage with your followers by responding to comments and messages.
11. Review Exchanges
Join online groups or forums where authors exchange books and reviews with each other. This can be tricky as you want to be honest in your reviews, but because you’re working with another author, you might feel compelled to be more positive. In this case, you’re also committing to reading the other author’s book, so you’ll need to make time to do that and post your review in a timely manner.
12. Book Giveaways and Contests
Organize book giveaways on social media platforms (e.g. author takeovers), Goodreads, or your author website. Ask the winners to leave a review after they have finished reading your book. Get as many participants as you can by sharing your giveaway on social media, your author website, and relevant online communities. Be clear on the rules and conditions of your giveaway to avoid legal issue.
13. Book Clubs
Contact local or online book clubs and offer to provide them with copies of your book for review. Even better, ask to be a speaker at one of their meetings.
14. LibraryThing
Library Thing is similar to Goodreads…a place for people who love to read. You can list your book on LibraryThing and offer it up for review in their Early Reviewers program.
15. Local Newspapers and Magazines
Contact local newspapers and magazines, especially if they have a book review feature, and ask if they would be interested in reviewing your book. If your book taps into something local or newsworthy, even better. Note that newspapers and magazines receive many unsolicited books for review, so by contacting them directly with a great press release or pitch, you can help yourself stand out.
16. Online Book Tours
In a tour, you’ll be using many resources offered above such as bloggers, podcasters, and YouTubers. Many tours just have information about your book, but others will also include reviews. In tour, you commit to 7 days or more to visit each tour location for an interview, leave comments, or whatever you set up in advance. Plan your book tour well in advance of your book release, and create a detailed schedule. You can hire services to set this up for you. To find services, do a search “book tour services”.
17. Reach Out to Previous Reviewers
If this isn’t your first book, reach out to the reviewers of your past books and see if they’d be interested and reviewing your next book. If the reviewer is a reader, see if they want to join your ARC team for future releases. Be sure to offer a big thank you when they leave a review!
18. Email Signature
One of the easiest ways to remind people to review your books is to include a request for a review in your email signature along with a link to where your book can be purchased or reviewed.
While many reviews will come in as your books sell and readers read them, you can help boost sales, especially when your book releases, by actively seeking reviews. Remember to be polite, respectful, and not too pushy when asking for reviews. Always express your appreciation for the reviewer’s time and feedback, whether it’s positive or negative.
NOTE ON NEGATIVE REVIEWS
First an important reminder…
Reviews aren’t for authors. They’re for readers!
Second, we need to define a negative review. I’ve heard authors fuss in author groups about getting a 4-star review. You have to remember that reviews are subjective. Some readers are generous with the 5-stars and others make you work for it. Plus, if readers are suspicious of 5-stars, then 4-star reviews might be better for encouraging sales.
My opinion is that 1 or 2 stars aren’t great. Some people just leave the rating (stars) but no review, which can be frustrating since you don’t know why they didn’t like it. Some readers will leave a bad rating or review because the book wasn’t delivered, which isn’t your fault. At the same time, you’re using that platform to sell and deliver your book, so it’s on you to make sure it can provide the book and good customer service.
For those readers who leave bad reviews, your best course of action is to do nothing. There are BookTubers that do videos on authors who fuss about bad reviews, which end up looking bad for the author. Remember, reviews aren’t for you. Your beta readers and editors are the one who give feedback for you. Reviewers are to help other readers decide if they want your book.
Here are some other important things to remember about reviews:
- A few bad reviews among mostly good ones can be a good thing. It shows they’re real, which makes readers more comfortable in buying.
- Bad reviews can help sell a book depending on what it says. Too many sexy bits for one reader could be the reason another reader buys it.
- Bad reviews can give you feed back. If you’re getting reviews about editing or formatting issues, you can fix those. You can add a note in your description that a new version was updated to fix them for future readers.
- Bad reviews can help you improve your cover or blurb if for some reason its attracting the wrong readers. The first covers for my romance gave off a bit of a sweet romance vibe (that and for some reason the book ended up in the family drama category), and sure enough, at least one reviewer fussed about the sexy bits. When I got my rights back, I made new covers that better fit the books and what readers will find when reading them.
Do you have other ideas about getting book reviews? Let me know in the comments below.
The Romance Writer’s Ultimate Guide to Preparing for NaNoWriMo
October 9, 2023 in Blog, Video, Writing Romance
National Novel Writing Month is right around the corner! Find out to prepare for and survive the 50k writing challenge!
Text version is below the video.
You might be wondering, why bother to write like a madman just to get a bad draft? The answer it two-fold:
1) Bragging rights. It sounds impressive to say you wrote 50,000 words in a month.
2) Completing a draft of a novel. Yes, it’s a bad draft, but often the hardest part of writing is the first draft. At the end of the 30 days, you have 50,000 toward a completed book.
An aside on writing fast…
Writing seems to be the only task for which doing it quickly is considered bad. Play the piano everyday…good. Practice a language every day…good. But write every day and complete a book in a month is bad. Why?
I have two thoughts on this:
One is that because many quickly written books are in the romance genre, which already is considered the lowest of the low, despite outselling every other genre combined.
The second is that the negative nellies seem to think fast writers write and publish, not bothering to revise and edit, which isn’t true. At least not any more true than the indie author that takes a year to write something and loads it up on Amazon. Authors who release frequently have a schedule. While a book might be written in a month, it won’t be published for two months after that, because it goes through editing, formatting, and presale. The book that goes up today was written two or three months before.
Okay…rant over.
If you’re serious about writing a book, National Novel Writing Month (NaNoWriMo) can jump start your effort. Many NaNoWriMo participants have parlayed their 50,000 words, after lots of editing, into a published work, including Sara Gruen’s Water for Elephants and Erin Morgenstern’s The Night Circus.
It sounds daunting to write 50,000 words in 30 days, particularly in November, when the holiday season is in full swing, but it can be done.
Tips to prepare for NaNoWriMo:
1) Register and learn about NaNoWriMo. It’s free, and the site has tons of information, tips and a support forum of like-minded writers.
2) Plot before November. Although it’s cheating to write before 12:01 a.m. November 1st, you can jot down ideas, do research, and make an outline. Even if you’re a pantster, you can make notes on what you already know about your novel. Some ideas include:
- Creating your book’s premise (character, goal, conflict)
- Sketching your character’s goals, flaws, conflicts, personality, backstory, etc.
- Deciding your settings
- Identifying what happens at major plot points
- Summarize each chapter (this is the level I plot at so that I never am stuck on what needs to be written when I sit down to write)
Consider grabbing the Romance Author’s Novel Organizer to help you take your romance idea from idea to a selling novel. The Romance Author’s Novel Organizer is available in print at Amazon.com or you can get a digital PDF version that you can download and print in the Write with Harte/Jenna Harte shop.
3) Create a schedule. The reason most people don’t write is that they don’t think they have the time. In NaNoWriMo (or in any writing goal) you have to make the time. Find a big pocket of time or several little pockets of time every day. For example, for 50,000 words in a month, your daily word count is 1667 words a day. You can strive to write 500 in the morning, 500 words at lunch and 667 words at night. Or 900 words in the morning and 800 words at night. Writing 1667 words takes an hour, maybe a bit more if you KNOW what you plan to write (see #2 above)
4) Find a writing space. With wi-fi and laptops, you can write just about anywhere whether it’s your kitchen table, deck, local cafe or the library. Pick a place that is comfortable and inspirational. Make sure you have good lighting and a comfortable chair, as well.
5) Gather your tools. All you need is a computer and a word-processing program. Some people like to use writing programs like Scrivner, Ulysses or YWriter. You might want to try voice recognition and speak your book. Dictation is faster (if you’re low on time).
Other tools to consider are synonym and phrasing books, notebooks, and bookmarked websites or apps that store your research, provide timers, and other tools.
6) Put together your NaNoWriMo kit that includes everything you need to write and feel inspired. Over at the NaNoWriMo forums, writers have shared what goes in their kits. Most have coffee or tea and notes. Others have lollipops or other kinds of candy, a “Do Not Disturb” sign, pens and pencils and a favorite shirt. My kit includes coffee, my notebook, access to the Internet (for quick research), reference books and music, usually some sort of R&B music source.
7) Get excited. Writing is hard under the best of circumstances, but writing 50,000 is a huge undertaking. You’ll suffer from writer’s block, get tired, and even worse, you’ll fall behind requiring you to double or triple your daily writing count to catch up. And yet, it’s a thrill to challenge yourself to try something new. You don’t have to worry about quality, so you can let your mind go and see where the characters take you.
Surviving NaNoWriMo
Prepping for NaNoWriMo is fun and inspiring. You might find yourself champing at the bit for November 1 to come so you can start writing. However, like many goals, once you get started on them, the enthusiasm can wear off as the challenge hits you. Here are tips to staying surviving NaNoWriMo.
1) Know what you want to say each time you sit down to write. For me, the most difficult part of NaNoWriMo isn’t the writing. I can write the minimum required 1,667 words in about an hour. The hard part is if I don’t know what to write. As a pantster by nature, I’ve done so many NaNoWriMo’s where I’ve hit a wall around day 8 or 10 because I didn’t know what to write. This is where plotting helps. I know the pantsters out there are fussing, but even as a pantster, you can still plot your next scenes even if you don’t plot the whole story. If you get stuck, write anything. Usually the act of writing will jump-start the creative juices.
2) Silence your inner critic and editor. The second hardest part of NaNoWriMo is turning off the voice in your head that tells you your writing sucks and your grammar is wrong. NaNoWriMo is all about quantity, not quality. You can go back later to clean up your work.
3) Go, go, go. I’ve been doing NaNoWriMo for many, many years, but I’ve only hit the 50,000 mark a couple of times. However, I don’t feel like a failure because even though I missed the mark, I still wrote more words than I would have if I hadn’t challenged myself. So, even when I fall behind, I don’t give up. Ultimately, it’s all about writing. If you’ve written, even if it’s not 50,000 words, you’ve had success.
4) Keep track of word count and strive to stay on pace. The minimum daily word count to achieve 50,000 words in 30 days is 1,677 words a day, which isn’t a lot. But if you miss a day, you have to write 3,334 words, which is significantly more difficult. Even if you can’t get all 1,667 words in everyday, strive to write something each day to avoid getting too far behind.
5) Enlist support and cheerleaders. Let your family and friends know what you’re doing so they can support you. If you need more support than that, visit the NaNoWriMo forums or attend a live NaNoWriMo event (which you can find in the forums). Or join the Write with Harte Preptober Writevember challenge, for tips, inspiration, and access to a support group.
6) Take care of yourself. Adding a big feat like writing 50,000 words right in the middle of holiday season is crazy. Your time and energy are pulled in different directions all ready. Your best course of action to get it all done is to get plenty of sleep, eat right, and get regular exercise. In fact, during a workout is a great time to plot your next scenes.
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The challenge started on October 1, but it’s not too late to join in and catch up. The Write with Harte Preptober Writevember Challenge coincides with NaNoWriMo to support writers wanting to take the NaNo challenge, however, here at Write with Harte, the challenge is whatever you want it to be whether that’s finishing a book you’ve already started, writing a short story, or whatever writing goal you want to set.
How to Write to Market in Romance
October 3, 2023 in Blog, Video, Writing Romance
Learn the pros and cons of writing to market, plus the steps to research and write a romance to market.
Text version is below the video.
What is Writing to Market?
If you were to read any entrepreneurial book or blog today, nearly all will recommend the following when deciding on your business produce or service; learn what people want or need, then provide it. That is the essence of writing to market. It’s learning what readers want and creating a story that fulfills the essence of what they’re looking for.
There are some who think this type of writing involves selling out or providing something formulaic or lacking in substance, which, to my mind, is insulting to readers. They don’t want formulas or shallow stories.
I think the backlash comes from the fact that most writers don’t have an entrepreneurial mindset, at least not when they start out. Switching from indulging their creativity to fulfilling a market need is seen as being different, as if one can’t be creative if they’re writing to market. But any author who wants to sell books, whether or not they write to market, needs to find readers, so either way, they need to provide something readers want.
Another concern is that writing to market means copying other writers, which is incorrect. Certainly, you want to study the books that are resonating with readers, but you don’t want to copy them. When you’re writing to market, you’re trying to tap into similar emotional triggers of successful books in your genre. It’s that adage of writing something similar but different.
Why would you want to write to market?
Any writer who has the goal of publishing and selling books MUST get to know their ideal reader. Traditionally, a writer would have a book and then go out to find their readers. In writing to market, you learn about the readers first by studying what’s selling. You determine what the readers like and expect in themes, tones, style, and even cover design. Then you write a book that will appeal to that group. The advantage is that, in theory, you’ll ride the wave of popularity and sell books.
Finally, writing to market might make you a better writer by encouraging you to write in areas you might not have considered before. I have ghostwriting clients who have me write to market and it’s challenged and pushed me to write things I’d have never written on my own, which has made me a better writer.
Why would you not want to write to market?
If writing to market increases your chance of success, shouldn’t you do it?
Not necessarily. There are several reasons not to write to market.
First, it’s possible that the market is reading books that you don’t like or feel comfortable writing. For example, maybe dark romances are all the rage, but you prefer something lighter. Maybe slow burn is popular, but you like to get your couple together earlier in the book. Perhaps you don’t want to write about a billionaire, or you’d rather have the billionaire be the woman.
You can force yourself to write something that you think will better fit the market, and it’s possible that doing so will expand your writing chops and make you a better writer. On the other hand, forcing your writing can potentially make you inauthentic, something that readers will notice and not like.
Second, there is no guarantee that your to-market book will sell. Just because you write to the market doesn’t mean the market will find your book. And in fact, in some ways, being like everyone else means you don’t stand out.
Third, while market trends last for a while, some are fleeting. You have to write fast to get your book published during the heyday.
The good news is that in romance, the market is voracious and varied. Chances are good that there is a market that your stories can fit into.
How to write to market:
- Since most romances books sell on Amazon, visit the top 100 romances on Amazon. (If you plan to make most of your income from ebooks, which most indie authors do, search the Kindle store).
- Click on a subcategory (or trope) listed on the left-hand side of the page that interests you such as billionaire, military, LBGTQ, regency, etc.
- Study the books in the top 100 that fit your publishing goal (indie vs. traditional). Make note of things like:
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- the cover
- the title
- the blurb
- Amazon ranking – if it ranks high for the category, check how it ranks in Amazon overall (or Amazon Kindle for self-pubbed books). A book could be #60 in a category, but if it’s 100,000 in Amazon, it’s not necessarily selling well and not one you’d want to judge the market on.
Note that you can use tools to help you study the market. Popular ones include Publisher Rocket, Self-Publishing Titans (free and paid versions), and KDP Miner (free Chrome Extension).
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- Read 2 or 3 books representative of the market. At the very least, read the excerpts that Amazon provides when you click on “Look Inside.” Usually, you can read a chapter or two and get a sense of the tone, voice, and style. Since many romance books that do well are in KDP, if you have Kindle Unlimited, reading lots of well-selling books is easier. But, unless you have to be exclusive on Amazon, don’t exclude romance books that are for sale on other platforms as well.
- When plotting and writing your story, you want to capture the same essence of the books that are doing well. By essence, I mean the feeling, not the actual plot. Remember, you want to make readers have a similar emotional experience but through a different story.
- Focus on your cover vibe. The cover is the first thing readers are going to see that tells them whether the book is in their wheelhouse. Have you noticed that most romcoms have the same cover style? When those readers are looking for romantic comedies, they skip right to the romcom-type cover. Spicy romances tend to have a sexy man on the cover. Dark covers often indicate a dark story such as mafia, paranormal, or suspense. Pastels or a happy, fully dressed couple on the cover generally suggest a sweet romance. Of course, you want to be careful about judging a book by its cover. These “rules” aren’t set in stone. With that said, covers are the first impression readers have of your book and from it decide whether to read the blurb and buy. If you’re writing to market, your cover should attract the market. Note that these trends can change, so it’s important to study them if your goal is to appeal to a specific reader.
- Next, make sure your blurb has a similar style and tone as those books that are selling. Like the cover, this is also where readers make the determination of if this book would be interesting to them. Study the blurbs in your market. Are they in first person? How provocative are they? Is the blurb written in paragraphs or many statements with spacing in between? Does it end with a question?
Remember, writing to market isn’t a guarantee of success. Yes, you have the potential to achieve success IF the market can find you. Along with writing to market, you still need to promote your book.
Write with Harte Romance Writer Critique Group
July 21, 2023 in Blog
I’m a big believer in critique groups, but it has become painfully clear that my group isn’t always the best at critiquing romance. Many things they suggest that I change are the very things that make my book a romance. The very best writers to critique romance are other romance writers so I’d like to organize a critique group with Write with Harte Members. This would be another perk of WWH membership.
Rules and guidelines will be established, but before we get to that, I’d like to know how many of you would also like to join a critique group, the best days/times for you, your thoughts on the structure of the group, and anything else you’d like to share. If you could complete the survey below, I’d appreciate it!
Write with Harte Critique Survey
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